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 Concurs Dominance

[Adi]

Dup? cum pute?i vedea din titlu, organiz?m un mic concurs.
Dup? cum ?ti?i, povestea din Dominance va fi spus? prin comic books. Tot a?a vor fi introduse ?i personajele. Unul dintre voi va avea ?ansa s? creeze un personaj care va ap?rea atât în comic, cât ?i în joc.

Ce trebuie s? face?i

E destul de simplu. Imagina?i-v? un personaj ?i scrie?i câte ceva despre el, o mic? descriere, un background story. Ca s? v? dau un exemplu despre ce trebuie s? face?i, v? dau punctul de plecare al unui personaj care este deja în joc.
"Daughter of Ka'Im al' Razim, one of the five cast kings on planet Isara. Her father is assassinated by the other cast kings, therefore she vows
that she will get revenge on the other cast kings. After a long battle, she gets her revenge, but in the process she loses her humanity and her
life, becoming something else."
M? rog, ?sta a fost punctul de plecare, încerca?i s? scrie?i cât de mult pute?i. Totu?i, nu foarte mult, n-avem nevoie de 50 de pagini, o s? dezvolt?m noi personajul.
Dac? ave?i ?i vreo idee despre cum a?i vrea s? apar? în comic, dac? ave?i vreo scen? în minte, cu atât mai bine. Deci e destul de simplu.

Premiul

Un tricou cu sigla Dominance.



Termeni ?i condi?ii

Concursul începe ast?zi, 6 ianuarie 2010 ?i se termin? pe 31 ianuarie, duminic?. Câ?tig?torul va fi desemnat pe 6 februarie. Oricine poate participa, cu excep?ia mea, a lui Vick ?i a lui Mihnea. Din juriu fac parte eu ?i Vick.
Aten?ie, personajul trebuie s? fie crea?ia voastr?, nu vreun copy/paste din alt? parte. Fi?i originali, gândi?i-v? cu cine v-ar pl?cea vou? s? juca?i.


Dac? ave?i întreb?ri, ask away.

[Nog]

 Oh well....there u go  :
  
           "Jakx "Break" Jackson ,fiul lui "Animal" Norgun.Avand o copilarie dominata de violenta, a fost fortat
la varsta de 14 de catrea tatal sau sa-si ucida cei 3 frati in lupta. A urmat studiile militare si in cele din
urma a fost recrutat la varsta de 28 de ani in Departametul de Interventii Armate 13, considerat cel mai
violent si eficient depart de interventii.Un an mai tarziu este desemnat comandantul operatiuni "Insula",
care avea ca scop mentinerea securitatii minelor de exploatare pe o insula nou formata.In urma minarilor
tot mai adanci este descoperiata o noua forma de viata care ucide tot personalul insulei.Jakx reuseste sa
scape cu viata si ajunge pe continent doar pentru a gasi tara distrusa de invadatori.Preia conducerea unui
grup de rezistenta ,iar dupa o serie de victorii este observat de catre Pawder. Ii este propus un loc in ceea
ce Pawder numea Frontul de Liberare,sub comanda lui Denny Armsong.
     Dupa eliberarea a 2 provincii, invadatori care s-au autointitulat Liga au decis ca miscarea Frontului de
Liberare trebuie stopata.In urma unui asalt asupra sediului general .decat Pawder ,Denny ,Jakx si al doilea
la comanda ,Blestarm, au scapat cu viata.Au fugit din tara in desert, unde Pawder a refacut miscarea de
rezistenta, de data aceasta sub numele de Cetatea lui Pawdarus.A impartit noile trupe  in 2 brigazi, una
dintre ele sub comanda lui Blestarm si cealalta sub comanda lui Jakx .in luptele ce au urmat,tot mai multi
s-au alaturat cauzei Pawdarilor, cum erau numiti de catre mase,incat au fost nevoiti sa desemneze alte 5
brigazi.
     Dupa intrarea in capitala tarii sale natale,Jakx a prelat conducerea Pawdarilor ca urmare a tradarii lui
Denny si a disparitiei lui Pawder.A pierdut toate trupele intr-un asediu asupra comandamentului central
al Ligii,moment care a declansat in el dorinta de a extermina Liga definitiv. Impreuna cu comandantii
brigazilor ramasi in viata decide sa asasineze membri consiliului Ligii.Ucide sistematic conducerea
opozitiei si elibereaza tara, dar setea de razbunare nu ii era satisfacuta si acum dorea sa fac un
exemplu din Denny ,care se refugiase in tara de origine a lui Pawder.
     Ideea inceperii unei campanii militare impotriva tarii care-i acordase azil lui Denny a intampinat
impotrivire din partea Consiliului Pawdarilor ,format din fostii comandanti de brigada.In urma un acces
de furie Jakx ii ucide pe membrii consiliului si pleaca singur pentru al ucide si pe cel care-l tradase.
 Atentatul sau esueaza si este inchis in Ozz,considerata cea mai sigura inchisoare de pe Underplane.
in mod paradoxal,dupa 2 luni este adus in aceiasi celula cu el chiar Denny.Afla de la noul coleg de celula
ca motivul pentru care s-a lasat arestat aste acela de al ajuta sa evadeze,ajutati din exterior de catre
Pawder.Cei 2 reusesc sa evadeze, iar Jakx il ucide pe Denny, ranit in timpul evadarii.Ajungand la locul
de intalnire cu Pawder, il anunta pe acesta de moartea lui Denny si ii spune ca il va lasa in viata,dar ca se
va intoarce.Atunci a fost ultima data cand a fost vazut Jakx.Pana acum...."
              
                  Imi cer scuze dc sunt greseli lexico-gramaticale, am baut cerneala si la orele de romana am dormit.
                  Imi astept portia de injuraturi pentru ca l-am scris in romana :D
   PS: dc  e putin just tell me si mai scriu

[Spikey]

Let's see...

Livia,alias "Liv",o studenta de 20 de ani,bruneta cu parul lung,cu trasaturi foarte frumoase alea fetzei si corp atletic,ajunge pe o masa de operatii a unei corporatii secrete,singura optiune de a ramane in viata fiind implantarea unor componente sofisticate care sa inlocuiasca o mare parte din organele distruse in urma deramarii unei cladiri peste ea.Parintii ei disperati s-o salveze sunt de acord cu acest lucru fara a fi constienti de ce va urma.Operatia se incheie cu succes si ea se trezeste...intr-un mod neasteptat pentru toata lumea operatia fiind defapt un experiment secret.In urma operatiei pe langa acele componente vitale in creier i-a fost introdus un microcip care pe langa faptul ca o priva de amintiri si de constiintza umana, era programat sa-i ofere niste abilitati pe care in trecut nu le avea...cele mai eficiente si chiar mortale miscari din diferite stiluri de arte martiale,facand din ea o masina de ucis cu chip de inger.In momentul trezirii,cei care se ocupau de microcip si controlul ei,au esuat in a face acest lucru datorita unei erori...efectul fiind devastator.Cei din camera de operatie au fost ucisi pe loc cu brutalitate.Liv a iesit pe hol unde parintii ei o asteptau disperati si plini de speranta ca se trezise.I-a ucis fara sa se mai gandeasca....

Well...what can i say...that's that for now si hope it's good shit cum se zice 

[Numby]

"Stephen Strings - an ex space entertainer with a variety of talents . He traveled the galaxies performing the biggest shows at the most important events but under all that talent a secred lied hidden. He was also a very skilled assassin working for a secret mafia association. After a show on the Nazetther Moon the whole planet explodes in a huge explosion that was caused by political extremists . Stephen almost escapes from the blast on a shuttle when the shock wave hits him and the ship's functions are disabled including life support. The ship was destined to drift into empty space as lifeless as our hero, or is it ?

[InsaneMind]

Casandra,born on a fucked up planet soon becoming on orphan.At the age of 16 she is sold as a slave to a trading ship , maybe for the best , and winds up in a display case on a planet wher  you can buy anything for the right price. It doesen’t take long and she is bought,chained and deliverd to her new “home”. There she expected the worst, but it didn’t came.New clothes,jewlery food and anything that she ever dreamt for was at her disposal.Beside her name she didn’t have anything else until now. Is this a dream?  The man who was her master now was very kind to her,almost like a father;he was the family she never had.He only wanted one thing from her: to take care of his dieing wife.But all good things come to an end so did this dream. After the wife died he found out the reason: a dissease contacted only from sexual contact with a diferent rase. Filed with anger he changed. Will he be alright? He became a tyrant and the beating and raping began. Stop, plsease! No one could stop him or the nightmares she had.She thought of running. Where?  One day after to much violance she was toust out like garbage for being almost dead. A scavanger finds her and once again she is sold, to a science facilty for organ retrival. She is in such a bad condition no one can do anithing with her,yet she is still alive. One of the scentist recognizez her race and knows the importance of her organism. He implants his life time work of technolgy into her and creates a slave like no other.He intens do flee from the facily and make a lot of money from her new assasin skills. I am “..doctor Zen,your new master”. He gave her 24 terestrian hours to do whatever she liked before running away with a ship of pirates he payed.He would come after her after the time expired.She returned  to her previos master to say goodby.He was in tears of joy she returned,he was begging forgivness I love you but..for the first time in years she was smiling..while his head fell from his body.  She felt good, covered in blood. Free. She chose to go with the doctor and thus a new life began for her.


Cred ca o sa fiu descalificat ca am intarziat putin..chiar daca am ideea de 2 saptamani..dar hey e vina lu vick ca nu sa tinut de capul meu sa postez    (now going to hide)

[pastilegratis]

In the not so distant future, A.I. has subdued H.I.
Robots have made humans seem weak, inferior in every way and incapable to compete with highly intelligent, emotionless, computerized brains.
Knowledge is power, humans struggle to survive.

Long Before the wars,
Frances von Mandelbrot was a ingenious scientist, he spent most of his time reflecting on the horrors he invented and wander dark hallways alone and tormented. He once was a talented pianist. A terrible disease rendered his hands useless. A resourceful scientist is never hindered by any problem. soon, His arms were replaced by robotic appendages powered by a limited a.i. core...he was overcomed by joy...years passed...and one dreary stormy night, while reading a gruesome tale, rage started to build up in him due to a never before seen programing bug. He lost control of his arms and brutally killed his beloved wife Lenore. he woke up the next day with his memory wiped...as he looked for his beautifull wife, he noticed her bloodstained clothes on the floor. After reviewing security fotage he turned pale. Such horrible news he could not survive. He prayed that she was buried alive. He dug out her grave to make sure she was dead...but nonetheless his nightmare was true...Lonore had died by his hand...

That tore his soul apart. He started working on a way to bring her back to life... many years and several scientific breakthroughs later. He found a way to embed nanotechnology into biological flesh. The procedure was very risky and he didn’t want to harm Lenores’ eventual resurection. Due to the lack of people whiling to partake in his gruesome experiments he was forced to search for victims in the surrounding forrest. It was a foggy night...a group of campers were pitching their tents...they failed to notice that one by one, their group was getting smaller...they quickly died for his purpose...the first few experiments failed miserably...but the last one was a outstanding success thus he created the first cybernetic humanoid organism.

Her name was Ciara.
As she came back to life. Half human, half machine… her mind was confused…until his programming kicked in. She was a psychotic but attractive woman. She had multiple personality disorders. Frances was unaware of this fact.  She remembered everything except her death…+ a little bit more…the entire human repository of human knowledge to be exact.
He made her his slave…she succumbed to his bidding. They carefully started the tedious procedure on his beautiful wife… Exhausted, and dreaming of Lenore, he went to bed… knowing that the very next day he will be reunited with his lost love…
 Ciara it seemed bypassed his programming…

She butchered Lenore’s remains and fled.
The sight of her head laying on the floor made him quite weak...
Not again…he cried…I must be cursed! He shrieked…
I can’t be sentenced to spend the rest of my life alone with the portrait of my beautifull wife!
Alone and insane, he grabbed for a bottle
The poison held in his hand was enough to silence a town…
But one last experiment wouldn’t take that long…

The machines were set, he drank the poison, he pushed the button…
While frances backed slowly against the wall… the room started to shiver and creek…
His horrid insanity had reached it’s peak.
He saw ciara, his cyborg slave and heard his wife call from beyond the grave
She spoke from the floor and made goulish demands.
While through cracked walls reached skeleton hands
Every horror in his life that had crept through his dreams
Swept his mad laughter to terrified screams
To escape the madness he reached for the door
But fell limp and lifeless down on the floor
His voice was soft and very slow
As he quoted the raven from edgar allen poe
“and my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor,
Shall be lifted…nevermore!"

As Ciara broke into his house to slay her creator she heard a piano playing…
She quickly went upstairs to the instrument hall, but no one was there…
She went to the lab. Frances was dead laying on the floor.
Her head soon fell next to his limb body.

[Adi]

Pentru c? mul?i dintre voi a?i fost în sesiune ?i n-a?i avut timp s? scrie?i, prelungesc concursul. Astfel, mai primim texte pân? pe 14 februarie, dup? care topicul va fi închis. Câ?tig?torul va fi anun?at pe data de 21 februarie. Pentru cei care au postat deja, dac? mai vre?i s? face?i complet?ri sau modific?ri, v? rog, posta?i.
Mul?umim pentru participare.

[Adi]

?i a venit ?i ziua cea mare.

Dup? o analiz? foarte atent? a fiec?rui text, a fiec?rui personaj, ne-am gândit inclusiv la ce am mai putea noi ad?uga la fiecare ?.a.m.d.. Dup? câteva dezbateri, am pus fiecare personaj în parte cu argumente pro ?i contra ?i într-un final, câ?tig?torul a fost desemnat.

And the winner is:

pastilegratis

Felicit?rile noastre sincere. Mul?umim înc? o dat? celor care au participat, ne d?m seama c? a fost totu?i ?i o perioad? destul de nasoal? (sesiunea), a?a c? apreciem cu atât mai mult efortul vostru de a scrie ceva. În orice caz, vor mai fi concursuri cu alte premii, a?a c? nu e totul pierdut.

Pentru a intra în posesia premiului vei fi contactat de c?tre Vick, iar pentru a decide modific?rile care se vor aduce personajului, pe ici pe colo, ca s? facem o form? final? cu care s? intre în joc, vom stabili ulterior o întâlnire, probabil tot la Vick.

Congrats.